(a). With reference to the Poem selected Discuss the central issues conveyed in a poem, (b).Make a critical analysis of both literary and poetic features employed in a poem towards achieving the intended objectives
INTRODUCTION
(a).
The central issues in poem is all about the main topic of discussion, the
central issue is always themes in a particular poem. Therefore, Themes refers
to the main subject of something such as a book, speech, art exhibition or
discussion. Macmillan, (2007).Or
Themes;
refers to the central meaning or dominant ideas in a literary work. Meyer,
M.(1995). A theme it is important not to mistake the theme for actual subject
of the work.
Generally,
themes are points that are central to a story which can often be summed in a
single word for example love, sacrifices, betrayal. A theme may be exemplified
by the action, utterances, or thought of a character. By using a poem of DOUBLE
BEATING by Richard Mabala to discuss different central issues portrayed in this
poem.
The issue of torture; refers
t to the situation of hurting a person deliberately in a very cruel way
especially as a punishment or in order to make them say something. Macmillan,
(2007).In DOUBLE BEATING a poet discusses the issue of torture when a husband
mistreats his wife though beating her with no big reason. This is evidenced
when a persona says
Today my husband beat me
Beat me till
the blood spurted.
(stanza
2, verses 2 and 3)
This
situation shows husband treats his wife in a cruel way. A poet tries to reveal
this in order to send a message to some people in the street uses to torture
their wives. This is not good to be inherent to the society.
The issue of betrayal; betrayal
refers to act of going against the agreement. Hornby (2010).In the BOUBLE
BEATING a poet shows the issue of betrayal though the Government, Government
betrays people by not paying their money on the agreed time as the result
people lives in a difficult situation because they have no money for their
survival. This is evidenced when persona says
Come again next week.
(stanza
6, last verse)
The
Government keeps on promising people for their money despite of their
agreement, that their money will be provided after three months to come. This
situation is not good because it prevents people’s development. The Government
should implement their promises in order to promote socio-political development
in the society.
The issue of poverty; poverty
refers to a situation in which someone does not have enough money to pay for
their basic needs. Macmillan, (2007). Generally poverty hinder people even to
afford his or her basic needs like food, shelter and clothes. In DOUBLE BEATING a poet tries to discuss the poverty situation
though the family of husband and his wife, this is evidenced when persona says
Three months of hiding the children from
school
Because
my daughter’s skirt
Is now
too short
To
cover her budding youth.
(
stanza 3, verses 11, 12, 13, and 14.)
This
shows that parents has no ability even to buy new school uniform for their
children. The poet discusses this poverty situation because even in our
societies poverty is enemy of development so poet wants people to fight against
poverty in order to promote socio-political development.
The issue of conflict; conflict
refers to angry disagreement between
people or groups. Macmillan (2007).The misunderstanding between people is un
inevitable in the society because there is no society without conflict it can
be social, political, or economic conflict. In DOUBLE BEATING a poet discusses
this issue of conflict differently for example
Internal
conflict. This is when a person anathematizes himself or herself about a
certain issue which is disappointed him or her. In DOUBLE BEATING, the poet
shows internal or personal conflict through wife who is in dilemma about who to
bream herself, her husband or the government. This is evidenced after a person
says
I only asked,
I was so foolish,
I failed to see the tell tale bitter lines.
( stanza 4 verses 7, 8, and 9).
This
show that, a wife is complaining for herself that she failed to cope with
environment thus why her husband beats her. This is also common in our
societies because people anathematizing themselves about their weaknesses.
Intra-personal conflict. This
is when two or more people are in
misunderstanding following their
socio-political or economic differentiation. In DOUBLE BEATING poet shows the
different conflicts like a conflict between wife and her husband, conflict
between husband and the Government. For instance the Government has in conflict
with husband following the delay of their money which was promised three months
before. This is evidenced when persona says
Come again next week.
(stanza 6, last
verse).
This
influenced them to inter into conflict in the sense that, they were promised
for their money to be given after three months to come but yet no money and
keep on promising.
The issue of revenge; refers
to something that you do to hurt or punish someone because they have hurt you
or someone else. Macmillan (2007).The action of inflicting hurt or harm to
someone for an injury or wrong suffered at their hand. In DOUBLE BEATING, the
poet discusses the issue of revenge though Husband to his Wife. The husband
harms his wife after being inflicted by the Government about coffee money which
was promised for long time. This is evidenced after persona says
When the hummer pounds the nail
And
the nail bites
Into
the wood
(stanza 7, verses 4, 5, and 6).
Wife
asks this question to neighbors that when the Government mistreats husband and
husband inflicts his wife?, this is common in many societies in Tanzanian, the
poet wants people to change.
The issue of disappointment; refers
to the feeling of being unhappy because something that you hoped for or expected
did not happen, or because someone or something is not a good as expected.
Macmillan (2007).In DOUBLE BEATING, the poet reveals the issue of
disappointment through the Husband who is expected to get his money from the
Government after three months and finally the promise became promise less after
the Government keep on promising to come next week. This is evidenced when
persona says
Come again
next week.
(stanza 6, last verse)
The issue of ignorance; refers
to the lack of knowledge or fact about situation or a particular subject.
Macmillan (2007). In DOUBLE BEATING, the poet reveals the issue of ignorance
through Wife who is ignorant about the causative agent of their conflict. This
is evidenced when persona says
Who is wood to blame?
(stanza 1, verse
8)
Wood
is symbolically presented to mean Wife, thus why wife is ignorant about who to
blame whether her Husband or The Government. Even in our societies people are
ignorant about why they are living in poverty situation with no solution.
The issue of tolerance; the
altitude of someone who is willing to accept someone else’s belief, way of
life, without criticizing them even if they disagree with them. Macmillan
(2007).In DOUBLE BEATING, the poet discusses the issue of tolerance through all
citizen presented by Husband for their coffee money, this is evidenced when a
persona says
Haven’t we all waited?
Three months to
be paid.
( in stanza 3,
verses 6 and 7).
The
poet shows this because even in our societies people are so tolerant to their
Government despite of their promises during the campaign to the citizen but
still nothing to happen.
The issue of exploitation;
refers to unfair treatment of someone, or the use of a situation in a way that
is wrong in order to get some benefit for yourself. Macmillan (2007).In DOUBLE
BEATING, the poet discusses the issue of exploitation done by the Government to
citizens. The Government collects all crops to the citizen and determines the price
of crops. So citizen are exploited by low price but also their money are not
given on time, this is for the aim of defending Government interest. It is
evidenced when persona says
Haven’t we all waited?
Three months to be paid
Three months of
faltering hope
And money spent in
dreams.
( stanza 3,
verses 6, 7, 15 and 16).
The
poet discusses this because in our societies exploitation is common for example
rich exploit poor as the result poverty being order of the day in our
societies. So poet wants people to be out of exploitation.
(b) Literary techniques and poetic
features.
Enjambment:
The
phenomenon whereby one line of poetry carries over into the next line
without any punctuation whatever. Bennett &Royle ( 2004).This is happened
in almost all lines, evidenced after a persona says
When the hummer pound the nail
(stanza 1, verse 4)
There
is no any punctuation mark in this verse; this is always used to create a
question to the readers about which mark should be put there to have meaningful
verse.
Figure
of speech or figurative language:
This is usually defined
in negative terms that is to say, as non-literal language. Figurative language
involves the entire field of what is known as rhetoric and includes, for
example, metaphor, simile, hyperbole, anthropomorphism, Bennett & Royle (2004).In
DOUBLE BEATING, the poet uses different figures of speech as follows
(a)
The use of symbolism; refers to a
figure of speech used to stand for something else. In DOUBLE BEATING, the poet
uses different words to stand for other things. For example the words like wood
stands for Wife, Nail stands for Husband, and Hummer stands for Government.
This is evidenced after persons to say
When
the hummer pounds the nail
And
the nail bites
Into
the wood
(stanza 7, verses 4, 5, and 6).
Wife
asks this question to neighbors that when the Government mistreats Husband and
Husband inflicts his Wife?
(b)
The use of hyperbole; refers to a
figure of speech which is used to make a fact exaggeration. Murthy (1998). In
DOUBLE BEATING, the poet used hyperbolic statement in order to take attention
to the readers. This is when persona says
Today my
husband beat me
Beat me till
the blood spurted.
(stanza
2, verses 2 and 3)
The
blood spurted, means she loses a lot of blood. This used to show how
seriousness is about a particular situation.
(c)
The use of imagery; refers to a
figure of speech used to create mental picture into the mind of the reader.
Murthy (1998). In DOUBLE BEATING, the poet uses to create mental pictures after
using some words; this is evidenced after persona says
Today my husband beat me
Beat me till
the blood spurted.
(stanza
2, verses 2 and 3)
This
creates the image of painful into the mind of the reader especially when
someone is beaten. Its implication range all the way from mental picture which
it is sometimes claimed are experienced by the readers of the poem to the
totality of components that makes up a poem.
(d) The
use of personification; is a figure of speech which is used to belief that
inanimate, lifeless object and abstract ideas are living being. Murthy (1998).
Non human to perform like human being. In DOUBLE BEATING, the poet shows this
when persona says
When
the hummer pounds the nail
And
the nail bites
Into
the wood
(stanza 7, verses 4, 5, and 6).
Hummer
and nail are given power to perform like human being because, the Hummer has no
ability to pound the nail but human has ability to take hummer and to pound the
nail into the wood.
A rhetorical question:
Is
a sentence in a grammatical form of a question which is not asked in order to
request information or to invite a reply, but to achieve a greater expressive
force than a direct assertion. Abrams, M.H,(1999).The poet uses to ask question
in which its answers are already known. In DOUBLE BEATING, the poet evidenced
this after persona says
Who is the wood to blame?
( last stanza and the
last verse)
This
question its answers are already known that the Government has to be blamed
because it is not responsible to take care for citizens. This is always used to
measure the level of understanding between readers of a work of art.
Paradox
A
statement that initially appears to be contradictory but then, on closer
inspection, turns out to make sense that underlies the statement. Abrams,
M.H,(1999).In DOUBLE BEATING, the poet uses the sentence that contradicts the
reader. This is evidenced when persona says
I failed to
see the tell tale bitter lines
( stanza
4, verse 8).
This
verse contradicts the readers to understand the standing point of wife, paradox
is used because it arrests a reader’s attention by its seemingly stubborn
refusal to make sense.
The
recurrence of an initial consonantal sound in words that come close together in
a line. Maruka, O.(2005). Also Alliteration can be defined as the repetition of
the same consonant sound in a sequence of words, usually at the beginning of a
word or stressed syllable. Abrams, M.H,(1999).In DOUBLE BEATING, the poet used
this technique especially when persona says
I failed to see the tell tale
bitter lines
(stanza 4, verse
8).
The
words tell and tale is of the same consonant sound. This technique is used for
emphatic reason and to create beauty of literary work.
Generally,
poetry as a genre of literature uses poems to perform various roles to the
audiences or readers like; to educate people, to criticize, to entertain
people, and to develop language skills, since poetry is economical in language
use.
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